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RETURN OF THE JEDI final show down of luke an vader.or how it ought to be!basically my version.

Slowly luke and vader circled.Luke readied his attack from classic first-position;vader held a lateral stance in classic answer.The first blows traded without injury.Again,they circled.Vader was impressed with lukes speed pleased the boy had become so powerful.Luke attacked again,he advanced in a flurry of lunges,each met by vader's lightsaber.The dark lord was pushed back and lost his footing on the stairs,he tumbled to his knees.Luke stood above him heady with his own power.It was in his hands,he could take vader,take his blade,take his life,take his place at the emperors side.Or kill them both and rule the galaxy.avenge and conquer.Vader realized the boy might best him.He felt surprise and he felt.....FEAR.Humiliation curled up to reveal bald anger.The emperor goaded luke to use the darkside,luke faltered for a moment-then realized what was happening.Luke drived hatred from his being,at that instant vader attacked.Luke jumped up on a railing,"i will not fight you father."Vader sliced the suports and luke hid in the overhang."you can;t hide forever luke","i will not fight you ...here take my weapon".Vader stopped.He sensed something.Luke tried to hide his thoughts of leia but couldn't.Vader was incredoulos."Sister?Sister!he bellowed.Your feelings have now betrayed her too....twins!he roared.Lukes love for his sister bloomed,he summoned an incredible amount of power from the force.He was filled with the spirit of yoda,ben,and contless other jedi.He gained such control of the force it was blinding.Vader realized this is what he would have become if he had not turned.This is what the chosen one was meant to become.Luke attacked with such furry such power the galaxy had not seen before.He pushed vader back, back, back until vader was on the gound.Trembling luke stood above vader,he wanted to destroy this thing of darkness.But then he realized he hated not his father but the darkness within him.Suddenly the emporer was there."Good!Kill him!Your hate has made you powerful!Now,fulfill your destiny and take your fathers place at my side".Luke hurled his lightsaber away."Never!I will never turn to the dark side!You have failed,palpatine.I am a jedi,like my father was before me".AND THE REST IS TIMELESS HISTORY.end of my version of lukes and vaders finnal fight.
Posted: Nov 13, 2007 5:51 PM | comments (7) | Report Abuse

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  1. -Whistles- who cares about the spelling? He did a good job at description and getting out your thoughts is what really matters. I enjoyed reading this. Good job!
    posted Nov 30, 2007 8:47 PM | Report Abuse
  2. I am not trying to be rude, but I would like to send you an edited version of your story. You could use it to replace yours, or just to see the difference.
    posted Nov 29, 2007 8:13 PM | Report Abuse
  3. Seriously, you can not find the errors? That is ridiculous! Start with the first word, Slowy, which should be Slowly. There are many other spelling mistakes. You are missing capital letters in Vader, Leia, and Luke. You are missing apostrophes and spaces all over the place. These errors are not in my mind and if you can not see them you should not be writing anything.
    posted Nov 29, 2007 6:11 PM | Report Abuse
  4. The spelling and grammar problems detract and distract from the story in a way that makes it impossible for me to enjoy it.
    posted Nov 29, 2007 12:42 PM | Report Abuse
  5. Need some spaces in between those sentences young one.
    posted Nov 20, 2007 2:02 PM | Report Abuse
  6. WOW!!!!!
    posted Nov 14, 2007 5:08 PM | Report Abuse
  7. This has become the most powerful moment in the saga to me. I can really understand Luke alot more now that I am older.
    posted Nov 14, 2007 11:31 AM | Report Abuse

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