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THE ORIGINS OF DARK VEGETA........FIRST CONTACT

Who am i? where was i? and how did i get here?....my memory was blank, all i knew was the here and now i could recall nothing had i had a memory wipe? then i thought hmmmm memory wipe whats that?

I was confused my mind was spinning that is when the darkness once again began to consume me it was relentless, i was weak all my strength had gone i had no choice but to surrender to it.......

How long had i been out for? an hour, a day, a week i could only guess, my memory was still failing me so i started to look around trying to find some answers, this was a strange place dark and uninviting (well i didn't ask to be here) i slowly started to move around feeling my way through the darkness trying to find a way out, no matter which direction i faced there was no light nothing i could use as a starting point for my escape, i was weak and trapped yet strangely i was not hungry why? i began to feel my body (not that way), a strange implant had been inserted into my stomach was i part of somebody's sick experiment where they watching from behind these dark walls?.........(been talking with NG & Mezhan so) TO BE CONTINUED.....LOL.



Who knew what lay behind the dark walls i could hear sounds muffled voices? machines? i could make nothing out of them no clues were being given as to what lay beyond and i began to feel like i was loosing my mind.

The tube which had been inserted into my stomach seemed to know when i was becoming hungry and feed me just enough to maintain a steady balance within my body and i could feel my strength returning little by little.

How was i to escape this prison i was becoming stronger and more aware of my surroundings to the point that i realised i was not alone in here!!!! YES i was not alone many times i felt those in here with me brush past me, i tried to tell them to use a vacuum instead of a brush because of the bristles but it fell on deaf ears, i continued to be visited by these strange creatures never seeing them only feeling them as they glided past yet i never felt threatened by them, i could feel the goodness they possessed within and i could feel them sharing their strength, helping me i was sharing their thoughts i could see that they wanted out of this dark dank prison also.

A plan was forming the dark walls were softer in some areas than others, we were still unable to talk yet we thought as one, we would charge towards one of the softest walls and try to break through we were becoming stronger we had HOPE!!!

We knew where we wanted to hit and we knew we had to hit HARD, CHARGE!!!!
we were off heading at full speed toward what we thought would be our freedom,
CRASH...BANG...WALLOP.
were we through? There was still no light darkness still surrounded us the wall remained undamaged THIS WAS NOT POSSIBLE!!!!
Within seconds i began to clear my mind from the disappointment of our failed attempt i began to think about what went wrong.....whilst i sat their in the dark my captors decided i need to be taught a lesson in obedience, i never saw it coming i only felt the blow to the back of my head then another into my side i could see nothing, was the walls fighting back?
How was this possible? Was we in a living vessel?
I could feel my friends sheltering to one side there was nothing they could do to help this was my fight and i knew i would lose.

(To be continued) *its late and I'm going to bed*
Posted: Mar 4, 2008 5:16 PM | comments (6) | Report Abuse

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  1. Hi Mezhan thanks for the comments your pointer is duly noted my friend....Yes i got your email and it was my pleasure to cheer you up, anytime you feel like a chat just let me know....till we speak again my friend MTFBWY always.
    posted Mar 12, 2008 5:24 PM | Report Abuse
  2. The plot thickens! As I said before, this is going along nicely, and I do like the direction it's taking - where is he indeed! The only bit of con-crit I could give is to keep a watch on those 'was' es. eg- was we on a living vessel, should be 'were we...etc"
    Also, dunno if you got my email or not (i'm terrible at checking mine lol) but I just wanted to say thanks for cheering me up the other day friend!
    posted Mar 12, 2008 3:03 AM | Report Abuse
  3. Hey DV pretty cool pics with the Stormtroopers mate. Were they taken at collectomania?
    posted Mar 11, 2008 3:05 PM | Report Abuse
  4. You're welcome :) Anytime, let me know when you update.

    Umm...your master shaper? *quirks a brow* XD
    posted Mar 8, 2008 6:09 PM | Report Abuse
  5. Hey thanks for the comment Mezhan, i shall do my best to please my Master Shaper *bows forehead on ground*
    posted Mar 8, 2008 5:01 PM | Report Abuse
  6. Ooh I like where this is going, please continue! I like how it's rather I, Jedi esque on the first person style, not often you see these sorts of fics around, they are quite difficult to write I find. Keep it up!
    posted Mar 7, 2008 4:25 PM | Report Abuse

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DARK VEGETA
  • DARK VEGETA
  • A.K.A.: Lordus
  • Level: 26
  • Rank: Sewage systems manager
  • Alignment: dark side
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