(This is what I did when I left Dantoonie a while ago and it took me this long to write about it. There's more so don't worry! Enjoy and comment are always welcomed. If you want the entire story, leave a message!)

Part I: Going into the Malastare Cave.


After traveling for days, Jes comes upon the cave from her dream. Taking a deep breath, she walks in. She thinks to herself. ?What am I doing here??

Her first impression of the cave was that it was very cold and smelled wet through the walls. ?Must be a river or something around here.? She tells herself. As she continues to walk, the path becomes softer and the walls start looking like rocks. Jes leans on the wall to feel it and was surprised. ?There?s no vines on the rocks or broken pieces. This cave is starting to look as if it was just created?? All of a sudden, Jes starts to remember something. ?The soft ground, fresh rock walls?exactly how my dream was.? She continues walking, more confident than before until she reaches a fork in the cave.

One direction is narrow, but brighter. The other passage is wider with the soft ground, but darker. ?I don?t remember this in my dream.? Jes says to herself. Then, as if a button was pushed in her mind, Jes recalls something Katra told her when learning to be a healer. ?Clear your mind of all thoughts and concentrate. Let the Force guide you.? Jes takes off her sweater and sits down on the ground. ?It helped me as a healer, I hope it will help me now.? She said to herself as she closes her eyes. Through the Force, Jes is standing up, facing the two entrances. Looking at the more lit direction, Jes sees a river next to her. Then as soon as something, like a leaf falls in the river, a big water monster jumps out showing its sharp teeth. Then the image changes to the other direction. The soft ground continued on until it stopped in front of a pond surrounded by five candles. On either side of the pond, two statues holding sabers stood guard. The statues looked familiar but she couldn?t make them out. Then she opened her eyes. ?Thanks Katra? Jes said while getting up and goes to the left side. It was exactly the way she saw it in her vision, but the walk was longer. ?Maybe I saw wrong? she started thinking to herself until Jes saw something flickering up ahead. ?Could that be?? she kept walking until she got to the end.

She stands under an archway and looks in. There, exactly in her dream and vision, was the pond in the middle. The five candles, in different colors, were in their spots as well as the two statues against the wall. Jes slowly makes her way towards the statues, still thinking why they look so familiar. Then, one of the statues all of a sudden came at her. ?What the?? Jes said and reached for her saber. ?Where?s my saber?? she keeps patting around her pants until the statue knocks her down with its stoned hand. ?I?m in trouble now? as Jes falls to the ground and looks up as the statue lifts up the saber and was about to strike her when another saber blocked the hit.

Not knowing that she closed her eyes, Jes opened her eyes and looked up at who was holding the other saber. ?Lauder?? she smiles, realizing why she recognized the statue. ?This is an intruder. She must die.? The statue said. ?Only a direct bloodline of the original heroes of the war can enter here.? ?She is from the direct line Zeke.? Lauder said while helping Jes up. ?Yes, I am a direct descendent. My brother fought in the war.? ?Who is your brother?? ?My brother?s name is Obi Wan Kenobi and I am is sister, JesMar Kenobi.?

...Part II coming next..