“May the force be with you, WAHAHAHAH! -Dan Onasi, mocking a jedi before battling him”

Dan Onasi # 2

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Dan sighed. He was within the gardens in the jedi temple, practicing his ability. He closed his eyes and raised his right hand. He was trying to levitate a rock and make it fly into his hand. Envisioning the rock lifting itself in the air, Dan sighed. He heard the rock rattle on the ground it was on, but it didn't rise above the ground. Dan sighed and lifted his right hand even higher. He could feel the rock rise above the ground, but only slightly. He raised his hand higher. The rock was slowly rising above the ground. Dan opened his eyes slowly and looked at the rock. He felt a quick flame of pride seep through him. The rock all of a sudden dropped back towards the ground. Dan immediatly intercepted and stopped the rock from falling down completly. (Don't get proud on something you haven't done yet,) Dan thought. He then felt the rock lift above the ground. He then slowly pulled the rock towards himself. Dan pulled it and then opened his eyes and saw the rock in front of him. Smirking, Dan put his right hand underneth the rock. The rock slowly lowered into his hand. "That's one way to do it," Dan said as he put the rock into his robes and turned around, leaving to meditate in his room.

Ki-Adi Mundi sighed and shook his head. It had been sometime since Dan had become an apprentice, 8 years, to be precise. He had since changed from the young child into a rather mysterious 10 year old. He sighed. The force was empty with this Dan Onasi, and yet, the boy could wield the force almost as well as any other child of his age.
"Some thing troubles you Ki?" a familiar voice asked. "First teacher?" Ki asked as he turned around to see his old master, "What do you want?" "Your troubles are strong and numerous," she said, "You worry about this boy?"
Ki sighed. "Yes and no," he said, "This child is empty with the force. With very few exceptions, I've never felt anything like this." The Dark woman put her hand on Ki's shoulder, "He is a rare species," she said, "But he is capable of being a jedi just the same. Many agree that he wields the force, yet is unable to sense within it." "How, though?" Ki asked. The Dark woman drewback, "I don't know," she said, "It is possible that he could have been stripped of the force a long time ago." The dark woman then pulled her hood back up and left.


NOTES from the man behind Dan
1.) Kreia is stupid :)
2.) Again, another pointless image.
3.) I would appreciate it if anyone would help me with my Kir Kanos costume. Here is an image of him. I'll be making it this year instead of Sion. (Help...Please?)
4.) The story has progressed little. Sorry about that. It'll pick up in the next week or so.




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    • Sekhmet
      Sekhmet

      O.K., will check out Dianthus, but want to try your way first. Talk to ya later!

      posted Oct 6, 2008 7:10PM - Report Abuse
    • Vader DarkKnight
      Vader DarkKnight

      cool, i'm gonna go offline now, wife says i've been on to much lol best do what i'm told, see you soon... [+more]

      posted Oct 6, 2008 2:35PM - Report Abuse
    • Vader DarkKnight
      Vader DarkKnight

      awesome, i might get it then, and congrats to you for reaching lvl 20 : )

      posted Oct 6, 2008 2:30PM - Report Abuse
    • Sekhmet
      Sekhmet

      THANKS! Will try that !

      posted Oct 6, 2008 2:25PM - Report Abuse

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